tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378922876124071805.post3894283206474411764..comments2023-08-19T05:37:47.079-07:00Comments on BA Hons CG Arts & Animation- UCA Rochester- Oliver Gadsby: THE OLLIPEDE, FINAL PIECEOliver Gadsbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08901252688789029226noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378922876124071805.post-88043211636681087802011-11-01T15:51:19.357-07:002011-11-01T15:51:19.357-07:00hey Ollie, creative partner here! after some of ou...hey Ollie, creative partner here! after some of our chats, and finally being able to access your blog, but hey! i agree with phil, but i would like to add this is a self portrait althought the house in the background is very good, it draws the eye too much, maybe getting rid of it completely, also with the lighting i had troubles maybe a softer airbrush to give it more of a feather-like lighting, and maybe considering a bounce light, one last thing would be i like the body structure and mid-metamorphosis transition but i would like to see more of your face within the image. :DJamie Tibbotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10084863389332498850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6378922876124071805.post-57929565792985500442011-10-29T09:45:59.725-07:002011-10-29T09:45:59.725-07:00Hey Ollie,
I'd suggest a cropped view - at th...Hey Ollie,<br /><br />I'd suggest a cropped view - at the moment we've got a lot of sky, and the subject of the image is stuck in a kind of mid-distance. Can you bring him to the forefront more, so we can get a better look at him? There's a lot of detail in his face going unnoticed right now...<br /><br />Also - you need to get your written tasks on here asap, Ollie...tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com